Thursday, February 7, 2008

the mist of the dust

The pages i have read are 5 to 26 and it has been very interesting now.The thing that made me like this book was the words. The way the author spoke the words.For example: "The dust stung the sides of her face,filling her nose and coating her lips.with awhir and a flutter,half a dozen sheets of notebook paper went flying past her like strange,white birds realeased suddenly from the confinment of their cage." That right there had me stuck to see what they really were talking about. turn out that she was talking about a piece of paper but, it seem preety cool on how the author * so seemingly told how that as her paper started to come out of her hand and left those fingers that the dust was just hitting in the face it really meant that she was just standing there in a para noia shock. she looked like a rock that hasnt been moved in years.Its a good book so far and i liked it.

2 comments:

Mr. Malley said...

John...nice focus on that quotation.

proofread, end with a question, and mention the title, author, and page # in the vital statistics section.

delicia08 said...

yeah john, I agree with Mr.Malley great focus on that quotation but remember don't ever forget the page # author and title.